So recently I asked a co-worker to crit my shit. He suggested I draw characters from different angles since I trapped myself in the eye level shot (for concept purposes). Unknowingly I have refined my camera angles, where as before I used to play with them more. That night I went home and busted this out. I slapped some quick paints on, but haven't gone back to it yet. I don't know, I am kind of fond of that roughness.
Go check out his stuff: http://artdabbler.blogspot.com/
Originally wanted to get crazy buckwild on this thing, but I lost a lot of steam, and as opposed to sit there and polish poo, I decided to post it and move on. I learned what I have trouble with, working on this. And will have to come back at a later time and try to tackle something like this again.
This is how I feel about it: